by Daedalus » July 15th, 2017, 2:52 am
@Charlie82
There is an official 10 Body Point Ogre from the Elf Quest Pack of the North American game, but that one is only suitable after playing through a few dozen Quests (at least.)
For Ogres derived from Against the Ogre Horde, Phoenix's Body Point choices carry the advantages of precedence and wide distribution through his and drathe's localizations. Your choices match his, so I'd recommend sticking with what you have.
[With all of those choices, you certainly captured the feel of a choose-your-own-adventure game in a simple format--well done! As this Quest is designed for four Heroes and Mentor/Zargon, I'd suggest the initial descriptions and choices to be read to the Hero players be lettered in italics. The portions meant only for M/Z, such as the latter sentences noting consequences of choices, would remain in standard lettering, with instances of "you" changed to "a/the Hero." A note following the into would explain how M/Z should read the entries.
Second board:
L) Are Thunderbolt and Terror meant to be the Chaos spells Lightning Bolt and Fear?
M) A 1000 gold coin reward, while a fabulous amount, is a lot more than normally gotten for 2 Quests. For comparison, the Main Game System awards 1020 gold coins in total for the first 5 beginning Quests. Others who choose to play may wish to reduce the amount. -edit]
.. UNCLE ZARGON
WANTS.. YOU