[Preview] [Quest Pack] [4 Quests] - The Champion's Trial

[Just_Will]

Here is quest one with the spelling corrections made. Good catch by Gold Bearer!

Next up will be Durgin's Vault

[Figomurphy]

Great looking quest. Well done.

[Just_Will]

Up for your review is Quest 2 of the Champion's Trial, Durgin's Vault. As before, feedback, critique and corrections are greatly appreciated! [most current revision is further down. I'm deleting files as I revise an replace them so as not to waste space]

(I'm considering changing 2 Men-at-Arms: Dwarf's choice to 2 Men at arms: Halberdiers to balance the 'Durgin's Horn' relic. Thoughts?)

[Gold Bearer]

Nother real minor nitpick. Looks like there's a double space in there, with white.

Not sure about the horn. Is it supposed to summon the spirits of the men-at-arms? If it does they could disappear after the turn or maybe a few turns so it's not so powerful.

[Just_Will]

Nother real minor nitpick. Looks like there's a double space in there, with white.

Ok I see it. Easy fix.

Not sure about the horn. Is it supposed to summon the spirits of the men-at-arms? If it does they could disappear after the turn or maybe a few turns so it's not so powerful.

I hadn't thought about that. I'd rather have them stick around since men-at-arms die fairly easily. I could always scale it back to one man-at-arms.

[Gold Bearer]

Or make them scouts? They tend to be the least used anyway.

[Just_Will]

Or make them scouts? They tend to be the least used anyway.

Good call. And they disarm traps too, so it matches the dwarf's theme. I made the change to scouts, changed it so they can also be summoned at the entrance. I cleaned the text up a bit too.

[Big Bene]

I like the idea and the quests seem well balanced and fun to play, but I would add an in-game explanaination why the tombs are infested with monsters (at least Ladril's Sanctum is located in the land of his peaople), and why the spirits of the original heroes act hostile against the defenders of the empire.

[Just_Will]

I like the idea and the quests seem well balanced and fun to play, but I would add an in-game explanaination why the tombs are infested with monsters (at least Ladril's Sanctum is located in the land of his peaople), and why the spirits of the original heroes act hostile against the defenders of the empire.

I plan to do that in a larger full page narrative like the other expansion packs do. I'm toying with the idea that the slews of restless and hostile spirits of the chaos forces slain by the original heroes are bound in dishonor to the burial halls of the heroes who vanquished them. Sort of an anti-Vahalla

As for the Spirits of the original heroes, this is a trial for their would-be successors. The spirit of Rogar wouldn't just hand off the Star of the West to any old random yahoo. He (and every other hero spirit) must test the new heroes for worthiness in the only way they know how.... GLORIOUS COMBAT!!!

[Just_Will]

Up for your review is Quest 3 of the Champion's Trial, Rogar's Hall. Effective critique and comments are welcome as always!