Ye Olde Inn

A fellow forum member needs some help. He's making a mini-quest pack (5 quests plus 2 side quests), but as English isn't his primary language, he needs assistance with proofreading the text. If any members here are interested and have time to help out, the text file is attached below. Once the proofing is complete along with a few other bits (i.e. tiles) this pack will be available on the homepage. He's also working on another quest pack.

Here's a little preview of what this pack has in store as well:

mentor's text: Minions OF the forgotten legion
B: Zombies .. attack (no S)
C: OF water, killing the spiders.
D: a spider, another one takes ITS place.

Any special stats for the Keeper?

Loving all the new tiles!!

Can i just say, looks fantastic!

I can probably have it done tonight or tomorrow. I assume your looking for sentence structure adjustments as well as grammatical. This might actually be fun for me.

Here you go. Hope I didn't make too many changes. I moved a few words around and changed a few others for easier reading, but tried to keep it as is as much as possible.
I fixed the grammar and punctuation. Of course it may need a fresh set of eyes so I put it up on my google drive with sharing allowed, including further editing, for followers of this link.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YqK8BmM6mt1QkvXp_Dbi8bXTA8i8OljUziEVCcH--Ug/edit?usp=sharing

*edit- updated link

Is this link working for everyone? Does it require a google account?

I believe you need google account to open this.

sajungzak wrote:Is this link working for everyone? Does it require a google account?

I've opened it and scanned through it. Looks ok to me but I'll take a closer look when I have time

TMU wrote:I believe you need google account to open this.

I was worried that might be the case. BGG, if you need, I can email it to you, just PM me your email.
Well, at least it's free to set up an account...

Oh, I have an account