Ye Olde Inn

This is my revised version of "Halls of Durrag-Dol" for HQ - Heroes & Villains.

Placing treasure on the altar for dedication from the original Halls of Durrag-Dol has always confused me. Must the treasure be left there to avoid the curse, or may it be kept by the Heroes after placement and dedication, curse-free?

You seemed to have answered this in your rewrite with the text in room P, as "donate" more clearly implies the treasure is forfeited. Discarding Treasure Cards then makes the answer perfectly clear.

I'm not clear on the motivation for the Heroes undertaking your Quest, as no treasure is kept, no matter their choice. Perhaps a reward could be offered by a Dwarven patron.

Their motivation is a plot device that will show in some way or another withtin the grand storyline that is the HQHV continuity.
I hope I can remember it when I get to expanding it to that point.