Ye Olde Inn

by **Hero_Of_Retro** » August 9th, 2014, 7:27 pm

Thanks. I haven't been able to complete the cards yet. They are at the minute rough drafts. But it is so close to completion. The secret side quests are just something extra to do for alternate endings. Just a way to give the quest some more re-playability.

My personal opinion is they need to be tweaked.

I believe there's too much use of the exclamation point.

Rules of language are not my strong point, but I believe the proper wording for these would be "…weapon of unknown origin" and not origins. The way the card is written sounds weird to me but like I said, the rules of languages don't make sense to me so if someone else could verify.

The weapons that give the use of the Chaos set should have clearer rules. Do the Elf and Wizard get to use all of the Chaos spells, or do they replace an elemental set with the same number of cards they had? Going off of just the base cards, the Elf would have three spells he can cast in any given dungeon. By switching to the Chaos spells, does he still only get three, or does he get them all? If he only gets three, does he get to chose which three or is it a random draw of cards?

This is probably just my personal taste, but the original artifact cards were two tone. I try to make my artifact cards along the same lines as that. They aren't exactly two tone because of the gradients in-between, but I still keep with those colors. Again, that's just my personal taste but this is what I mean:

Staff.jpg

I only used this one because I see we had the same staff image from the internet for our use.

I just used the card template that I believe I got from here so the fonts don't match, but you get the idea. I also changed the wording a bit because "beholds" didn't fit and I felt the wording about the Chaos set fit better this way.

Just my :2cents:

Or three or four...

by **StratosVX** » August 18th, 2014, 4:45 am

Not to be picky, but I saw the spells after my last post. The wording on some of them needs to be reworked too. These are my suggestions:

Collapse: This spell allows the caster to block the path of a monster or collapse a wall to pass through as a means of escape. This spell is then discarded.
Protect: This spell uses the forces of nature to create a barrier around you. Once cast, you are protected from spells and physical damage for this turn and the next turn. The spell is then discarded.
Revive: This spell allows any fallen Ally or Champion to continue the quest. The recently deceased begins with full Body and Mind Points. The spell is then discarded.

When you say the spell is discarded, do you mean these are only good for one use, ever? Or do the heroes get these spells back after each quest like the other spell sets?

by **Sjeng** » August 18th, 2014, 8:17 am

Nice! I would try and get the hue of the cards evened out more. White and dark brown. No tones inbetween.
You can try this in photoshop by tweaking the levels of the image. Not the entire card.