Ye Olde Inn

by **sajungzak** » January 29th, 2014, 9:26 pm

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YqK8BmM6mt1QkvXp_Dbi8bXTA8i8OljUziEVCcH--Ug/pub
updated proof updated link
* edit
The link in a previous post has editing (copying) allowed, but only from that link.

I don't have a lot of time for this at the moment, so I'll contribute what I can piecemeal. Just as well, since I didn't get how to edit the googledoc. My suggested edits are in blue:

An Expansion to HeroQuest.

Box - Back Cover:

Contents

*A Quest book with five new adventures
*Two Side Quests, played outside of the board
*More than 20 new full color game board overlays

You must have the Return of the Witch Lord
expansion set to play these adventures.

The adventure continues ... Hidden in Black Fire
Pass, the ruins of Blackhold stand as a relic of a
forgotten age. The tower was once an outpost for
the empire, but now this forgotten ruin is the home
of the living dead. Skulmar and the remains of the
elite force, the Forgotten Legion, have gathered
immense strength and numbers. They must be
stopped at any cost.

You must travel to this tower of the damned to
cleanse it with the Shard of Light and defeat
Skulmar. But Beware! You must prevent the Shard
from falling into the hands of darkness.

by **sajungzak** » March 9th, 2014, 12:51 pm

Thanks for your input, I'll add it to the fire. I think he wanted Tower of the Damned to be in caps, since it is the name I think it is correct...
I need more eyes please. It's been a while, and mine are probably fresh again, so I'll go over it again too.
I will update with a new link, but google chromebook is weird with Word files. Maybe someone can give me their email so I can send them a pure copy.

* edit) hey, Daed, semicolons are cool. I like semicolons.
A semicolon is like a bowtie; it is not necessary, but it makes you look cool. 8-)

by **Daedalus** » March 24th, 2014, 12:31 am

You're right about capitalizing Tower of the Damned--I missed that it was also the title for the Quests. In that case, I'd swap a definate article for the demonstrative adjective:
"You must travel to the Tower of the Damned to cleans it with the Shard of Light and defeat Skulmar."

by **sajungzak** » March 24th, 2014, 5:11 pm

Daedalus wrote:You're right about capitalizing Tower of the Damned--I missed that it was also the title for the Quests. In that case, I'd swap a definate article for the demonstrative adjective:
"You must travel to the Tower of the Damned to cleans it with the Shard of Light and defeat Skulmar."

Thanks for the input.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YqK8BmM6mt1QkvXp_Dbi8bXTA8i8OljUziEVCcH--Ug/edit?usp=sharing