Cleric Cards

[Goblin-King]

Seems like you've edited some of the pictures. On my screen at least it's very obvious where you deleted stuff with a pure white up against the original background which is a light greyish-pink.
I know it's a bit of extra work to edit and re-insert the images, but if you are going to print these etc. I think it'll be worth it.

[arkcaver]

Seems like you've edited some of the pictures. On my screen at least it's very obvious where you deleted stuff with a pure white up against the original background which is a light greyish-pink.
I know it's a bit of extra work to edit and re-insert the images, but if you are going to print these etc. I think it'll be worth it.

Good catch! I actually wanted the pure white background so that the images would stand out against the beige card background. I started doing that, but must have gotten sidetracked.

I've edited the cards, and fixed a couple of typos.

[Dungeon Blogger]

I think that card back looks awesome. Very professional and it feels in-line with the spirit of the game.

[Daedalus]

And here is the last of the set. Any comments, corrections, etc? They have not been playtested whatsoever, so I'd appreciate anything you have to add.

The card back just says "Behold my chest of light!" to me.

Didn't the Japanese Pink Power Ranger have that power?

On to the cards, I hope this helps:

Seems like you've edited some of the pictures. On my screen at least it's very obvious where you deleted stuff with a pure white up against the original background which is a light greyish-pink.
I know it's a bit of extra work to edit and re-insert the images, but if you are going to print these etc. I think it'll be worth it.

Good catch! I actually wanted the pure white background so that the images would stand out against the beige card background. I started doing that, but must have gotten sidetracked.

I've edited the cards, and fixed a couple of typos.

Cure Ailments looks like it still needs pure white put in, and Drain Evil needs a bit more cleaning up.

As a general observation about the cards, if a Human Cleric starts out with just 3 spells and 4 Mind Points, then the Hero sounds powered similar to an Elf. What about Body Points? Are there any weapon restrictions that suggest a need for more effective spells?

Divine Healing- I like that a Cleric potentially heals better than a Wizard or Elf, but I hope there is some other kind of limit on the Cleric to balance such better spells.
Calming Influence- While it seems strange the spell can't be broken by a monster rolling dice, Morcar/Zargon may still move the monster in the way of the Heroes and force a later confrontation. Still, a Goblin has the same chance of breaking the spell as a Chaos Sorcerer (or better as it may move in the way more easily), which doesn't sit well with me.
Turn Undead- Perhaps the spell can be cast against a number of undead whose total Body Points are no more than the caster's current Mind Points.
Blessing-I'd like to see this spell toned down. Perhaps limit the bonus to just an additional Defend Die or limit the effect to just one Hero.
Healing Aura- I like the healing being tied to current Mind Points. That means the power of the spell can later scale with increased Mind Points--kewl. A Cleric would definitely want to have the Talisman of Lore equipped.
Return From the Dead- I'd change From > from. What if the Hero died from Mind Points being reduced to 0? by the way, I love the old-school D&D image!(Except for those doll feet.)
Cure Ailments- Unless M/Z has monsters and houserules in place to regularly add such effects, this spell won't see much use. Perhaps it should have an additional option to alternately heal 2 Body Points or 2 Mind Points.
Rightful Mind- As there is no Mind Point restoring spell to speak of (Psychic Recovery of the BQP is from a scroll), I'd say limit the restoration to 4 Mind Points.
Divine Intervention- Allowing the Heroes to escape death is pretty powerful. The new, reset Quest would need to be punishing enough to discourage abuse of this safety net.
Smite- The wording allows for a crossbow to gain this benefit. Are bolts intended to work that way? What about a Magic Dagger that always inflicts 1 Body Point of damage?
Doom- I like this spell, but maybe a monster should be allowed a chance to break it.
Shield of Faith- I like it.
Confuse- What happens if a monster is reduced to 0 Mind Points? Is it killed or in shock? I'd be in favor of allowing damage to be reduced by rolling a black shield on 2 combat dice.
Destroy Undead- While I think a Cleric should have extra power against undead, I feel this spell could use some kind of limitation. Perhaps the spell works against nearer or weaker undead first.
Drain Evil- I'd nerf this spell by having the caster roll a number of combat dice equal to his current Mind Points. Only skulls drain a monster's Body Points. They would be defended as already mentioned.
Intellect Drain- This is a cool idea, but it does a lot--it both recovers Mind Points and handicaps a monster against further spells. I'd cap it by only allowing it to reduce 2 Mind Points so powerful monsters with high Mind scores remain a threat and the gained Mind Points is no more than my suggested Cure Ailments.