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Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Friday September 20th, 2019 3:13am
by Presti70
j_dean80 wrote:The creature icon you used is a specific monster that doesn’t really match. Either someone should make a new icon or I’d put the X.



Here my 2 cents:
1. The dead end in Q2 that we already discuss.
(My proposal is: a secret door in room 18 to the hallway) - ok for me

2.The original title is "Caçada à Criatura", that literally translated is "Creature Hunt". Phoenix changed the translation to "Slumbering Monster">Should we keep the original title or go with Phoenix's take on the translation?
(My proposal is: even though I like "Slumbering Monster" better as a tittle, I think we should stick to the original title like we did with the other 4 Dragao quest packs) - Yes. I really prefer Creature Hunt.

3. Many people have proposed to remove Zargon as the villain and replace him with Lengrati the Sleep Wizard from this quest pack by the same author: http://www.lestodante.com/hq/quests/att ... wizard.pdf
(My proposal is: Even though I like the idea, id like to stick to the original once again since we are just here to translate not make our own quest) - Ok for Zargon

4. In Q2, Note C is kinda unclear cause of translation. The translation says 'tamper' which is quite distinct from search or open. How should that be changed?
(My proposal is: C. This empty chest is a magical trap. If a Hero searches for treasure before the trap is disarmed, he will lose one magical item they are carrying. Zargon chooses the item to be lost, but may not choose the Chaotic Sword of the Axe of Destruction.) - ok

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Friday September 20th, 2019 10:43am
by Anderas
Hello Presti70, and welcome to the forums! :-)

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Friday September 20th, 2019 3:12pm
by lestodante
j_dean80 wrote:The creature icon you used is a specific monster that doesn’t really match. Either someone should make a new icon or I’d put the X.


I did an attempt at creating the creature icon.
Anyone is welcome to modify it and do a better job!

creature icon.png

creature icon2.png

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Friday September 20th, 2019 10:41pm
by Drew
lestodante wrote:
j_dean80 wrote:The creature icon you used is a specific monster that doesn’t really match. Either someone should make a new icon or I’d put the X.


I did an attempt at creating the creature icon.
Anyone is welcome to modify it and do a better job!

creature icon.png

creature icon2.png

Let me know what the rest of you guys think :D I personally like it.

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Wednesday September 25th, 2019 3:39pm
by Drew
The final version is ready! Many Improvements made.
Enjoy here: https://docdro.id/UvLnasZ


To the mods:
It would be awesome if a mod could change the topic's name into "Creature Hunt" instead, since its the original title and I stuck with it.
And also it would be awesome if this quest pack, "The Rescue" and "The Attack on the Sleep-Wizard" could be posted in Inn's quest list.
These are the last semi-official quests that werent complete but now they are ready!

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Friday September 27th, 2019 6:21am
by Pancho
I second Drew's proposals. Would be great to have these two semi-official quest packs on the main website.

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Sunday September 29th, 2019 12:59pm
by Presti70
And what about this miniature for the Monster (D&D Angelfire - Chraal)?

Image

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Sunday September 29th, 2019 7:50pm
by Drew
nice one, there are a couple more minatures posted in the thread for the monster for those interested :)

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Saturday March 21st, 2020 10:51pm
by Kurgan
Awesome stuff. Check the spelling of the text on the Artifact cards at the end of the PDF though...

Re: Translation of "Slumbering Monster" by Roberto de Moraes

PostPosted: Tuesday March 24th, 2020 2:43pm
by lestodante
Kurgan wrote:Awesome stuff. Check the spelling of the text on the Artifact cards at the end of the PDF though...

Which mistake did you find?