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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby mitchiemasha » August 11th, 2017, 8:57 am

"The Council has laid silent in recent years," How about 'times'? I'll have a look at the quest later tonight.


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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby mitchiemasha » August 11th, 2017, 9:07 am

"Wizard, you have been summoned! Zanrath, the High Mage of Sarako, has summoned the Wizards' Council to his tower."

I love it in both stances but I'm not sure it breaks that writing technique i pointed out. How about the second being called/requested. There isn't really another word as extravagant and suited to the fantasy genre, summoned is a powerful word to use.


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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 11th, 2017, 4:49 pm

mitchiemasha wrote:"but now is being" is that correct? intentional?


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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 11th, 2017, 8:32 pm

mitchiemasha wrote:"The Council has laid silent in recent years," How about 'times'? I'll have a look at the quest later tonight.


Then I would use time again.
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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 11th, 2017, 8:34 pm

mitchiemasha wrote:"Wizard, you have been summoned! Zanrath, the High Mage of Sarako, has summoned the Wizards' Council to his tower."

I love it in both stances but I'm not sure it breaks that writing technique i pointed out. How about the second being called/requested. There isn't really another word as extravagant and suited to the fantasy genre, summoned is a powerful word to use.


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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 11th, 2017, 10:41 pm

Quest 2 (Hall of Atheneum):

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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 12th, 2017, 6:18 pm

Quest 3 (Chaos Level):

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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 12th, 2017, 7:10 pm

If anyone wants to pitch in a Quest or cards I would not be upset.
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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby mitchiemasha » August 12th, 2017, 9:46 pm

Running the Gauntlet. I'd remove the second 'while' and another paragraph has too many 'ands' init.


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Re: Summons of the Wizards' Council - a work in progress

Postby j_dean80 » August 12th, 2017, 9:54 pm

mitchiemasha wrote:Running the Gauntlet. I'd remove the second 'while' and another paragraph has too many 'ands' init.


Running the Gauntlet I took word for word from the original version. I just added the first half of the first line. Can't bring myself to change a lot on an Unofficial Official Quest.
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