[TRAD] Attack on the Sleep Wizard (from Dragão Brasil No.8)

[Pancho]

Sorry, a few more things;

The Magic horn card should say "awaken", rather than "awake".
And I think we should make clear that the the horn will awaken anybody on the game board that is asleep, not just the room that the horn blower is in, seeing as in the Sleep sorcerer adventure one blow on the horn awoke the entire kingdom.

[lestodante]

This ancient horn is able to
instantly awaken every hero who
has fallen under a magic sleep,
wherever they are on the board.
Blowing the horn counts
as an action.

If this is still wrong, feel free to write the correct text so the topic will not go any longer because of a card

[Pancho]

That's all good now.

[lestodante]

I was just adding: every hero or monster...
so it will awake not just humans

This ancient horn is able to
instantly awaken every hero
or monster who has fallen
under a magic sleep,
wherever they are on the
board. Blowing the horn
counts as an action.

[Pancho]

Ah yes, good call.

I can imagine a hero and a monster waking up together at the same time, having somehow managed to entangle themselves in a loving embrace. "Well this is awkward", says the hero, before chopping the monsters head off.

[Daedalus]

I'd phrase the Magic Horn like this:

Blowing on this ancient horn will immediately break all spells that have put any heroes or monsters on the board to sleep. This works like casting a spell, but the horn may be used by ANY hero. The Magic Horn works only once per Quest.

By the way, the primary edit for the Quests would be found in room F of The Sleep-Wizard, Change ". . . Lengrati immediately shapeshifts into the form of anyone hero, . . ." > . . . Lengrati immediately shapeshifts into the form of any one hero, . . . Aside from that, there is only the odd comma edit. Probably not worth your trouble.

[lestodante]

Your description seems too long to fit in the card and also more complex, I think. I like the easy way.
Neither I'd limit the use to once per quest because a Sleep spell is already used once per quest (usually).
But I also wanted to start the card with Blowing this...
So what about:

Blowing this ancient horn
will instantly awaken every hero
or monster who has fallen
under a magic sleep,
wherever they are on the
board. Blowing the horn
counts as an action.

Anyway I am not a native English so if your description sounds a lot better I will use yours.
Just let me know.

Oh and I didn't understand what you say about the "odd comma edit"

One last thing I forgot to say before: the wandering monster in quest 2 and 3 was originally a Gargoyle.
Personally I think it is odd and also too tough as a wandering monster. So in quest 2 I changed it with a more easy ]Fimir but if you guys prefer to be close to the original I will put in the Gargoyle again.

[Daedalus]

Your Magic Horn description works well--I'd consider it done.

About the commas, there were one or two sentences that could have used a comma after an introductory phrase--no biggie.

I agree a Gargoyle is overkill; a Fimir sounds like a better choice. My opinion is a change for a better Quest is a good idea in a localization.

[lestodante]

Guys, I really can't hide this anymore: I feel the need to share this update with you!
At first I wanted to make a complete release but it's taking really longer than what expected (even the cover is on its way).
Here is a small preview of the new cards I was working on, two of them are brand new and appositely painted by my friend Luis.
What you can see below is a low resolution version of the Italian cards; hi-res will come when everything will be complete, hope you will like them:

mago sonno artifacts IT.jpg

[Pancho]

Those cards are looking good Lestodante.
I'm looking forward to seeing more updates.