It's not your transcription, but the original Parchment Text that appears to contain a grammatical error: "Below is a great treasure, the Wand of Galimantius, a mighty Wizard of ages past." If you wanted, you could correct this incorrect appositive with: "Below is a great treasure, the Wand of Galimantius, which belonged to a mighty wizard of ages past." I also changed the Hero title "Wizard" back to the general case "wizard" of the original.
Another detail of the Parchment Text is the double quotes, which entirely encompass it. The Cabiri quote is nested within, so it should use single quotes and close with a double quote to end the full Parchment Text:
'Below lies a great treasure...you will be free to leave our shores.'"
Finally, I'd include the Wandering Monster line after the second page rather than on the first, as was done in the US Quest Packs.
drathe also localized this Quest. It can be found at
Quests<Homepage.