Goblin-King wrote:Well done for a first quest.
Thanks, also for your feedback.
A couple of comments:
I feel kinda unmotivated for even going on the quest. Is there a promise of a reward?
Why is Pamela or her father important? Surely the champions of the Empire aren't running errands for random peasants?
This was just a quick quest I put together to back up my question in the "Adjacent" thread, so it "may" need a little work.
I get that this isn't supposed to be a hack'n'slash quest, but a couple of goblins or something along the way would be good. Maybe? There's only 2 encounters.
The Gargoyle can attack if you are unlucky, but maybe some more monsters where the Mummy is hiding.
I really like the twist. The escort turns into a boss. Nice!
P am_bush! How could there not be a twist?
Maybe clarify how much the potion heals her? back to 1 BP or full health?
Full (2)
You also need to clarify how her escort mechanic works. Is she an extra model moved by the players? Does she automatic follow? Does Morcar move her?
She will stay somewhere between the first and last hero and will be moved by the first player....
And what happens if the heroes doesn't enter the middle room, but just takes her directly to the exit?
....until the door is opened, which she will do herself if the Heroes just pass it, then Morcar takes over.