by j_dean80 wrote:The creature icon you used is a specific monster that doesn’t really match. Either someone should make a new icon or I’d put the X.
Here my 2 cents:
1. The dead end in Q2 that we already discuss.
(My proposal is: a secret door in room 18 to the hallway) - ok for me
2.The original title is "Caçada à Criatura", that literally translated is "Creature Hunt". Phoenix changed the translation to "Slumbering Monster">Should we keep the original title or go with Phoenix's take on the translation?
(My proposal is: even though I like "Slumbering Monster" better as a tittle, I think we should stick to the original title like we did with the other 4 Dragao quest packs) - Yes. I really prefer Creature Hunt.
3. Many people have proposed to remove Zargon as the villain and replace him with Lengrati the Sleep Wizard from this quest pack by the same author: http://www.lestodante.com/hq/quests/att ... wizard.pdf
(My proposal is: Even though I like the idea, id like to stick to the original once again since we are just here to translate not make our own quest) - Ok for Zargon
4. In Q2, Note C is kinda unclear cause of translation. The translation says 'tamper' which is quite distinct from search or open. How should that be changed?
(My proposal is: C. This empty chest is a magical trap. If a Hero searches for treasure before the trap is disarmed, he will lose one magical item they are carrying. Zargon chooses the item to be lost, but may not choose the Chaotic Sword of the Axe of Destruction.) - ok
I personally like it.
