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Re: Loretome 25th

PostPosted: Saturday September 30th, 2017 9:23pm
by sajungzak
lestodante wrote:Ohhh great!! Tomorrow I will upload the file with your revisions!! Thank you for the help


I made a few more changes. I hope you like the flavor I added, but it's ok if you don't.

Re: Loretome 25th

PostPosted: Sunday October 1st, 2017 7:01am
by lestodante
I've seen, they are ok. I've just updated the file now.
I had to apply some cut on the cards Delay and Calm Down because the text was too long.
Anyone who wants to translate the Quest in other languages are welcome.

Re: Loretome 25th

PostPosted: Sunday October 1st, 2017 10:28am
by sajungzak
I'm glad I could help. It looks fun, and I like where this is going.

Re: Loretome 25th

PostPosted: Sunday October 1st, 2017 11:03am
by sajungzak
:ugeek: I notice a grammatical error made it through on note D. Instead of "What is the meaning of this strange inscriptions?", it should read either "What is the meaning of these strange inscriptions?" or "What is the meaning of this strange inscription?"

Plural vs singular. Needs to be the same throughout, one way or the other.

Cheers!

Re: Loretome 25th

PostPosted: Sunday October 1st, 2017 1:20pm
by lestodante
OK, fixed!!