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Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Sunday February 25th, 2018 1:23am
by j_dean80
Gold Bearer wrote:I haven't looked at the rules or quests yet but you've definitely got some really nice presentation going and a great theme for a quest pack. |_P


Thanks. I haven't even finished it yet but already getting too many ideas for a sequel.

Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Thursday March 15th, 2018 4:48pm
by Daedalus
j_dean80 wrote:
knightkrawler wrote:To be honest, I do not like covers without any characters or at least devices that are important to the story. That's true for every genre.
A background shot of the setting doesn't cut it for me.


The photo on the front cover is a Les Edwards. Only Jungle themed photo I've found of his.

I liked the first jungle-front cover a lot and have been waiting for it to show up on a Quest Pack. It's been a while, but I believe it is a Donald Kueker piece. Your Spell Card backs also look great.

Now for some criticisms. I think you could stand to sharpen the web on the indoor web tiles. I'd instead weaken the contrast of the leaf boarders on the Message from Mentor. They should blend more subtly into the background, in my opinion. While I like your graphic for the Shaman('s) Shop, the look of the art below feels too open with white negative space. Could you work up some kind of jungle-themed shelves or vine/leaf borders? I dunno--it's just an impression and brainstorm.

Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Wednesday April 25th, 2018 4:36pm
by The Admiral
This looks really interesting, with some lovely cards, but what would stop me playing is that many of the quest boards are non standard. Where would I get the board you are using for those quests?

Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Wednesday April 25th, 2018 6:10pm
by j_dean80
The Admiral wrote:This looks really interesting, with some lovely cards, but what would stop me playing is that many of the quest boards are non standard. Where would I get the board you are using for those quests?


Sjeng's "Forest Board" from here at the Inn is the only other board used.

Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Wednesday April 25th, 2018 6:19pm
by The Admiral
Where would I find it please?

Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Wednesday April 25th, 2018 7:18pm
by j_dean80
The Admiral wrote:Where would I find it please?


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Re: Building a new Quest Pack: feedback is appreciated

PostPosted: Thursday April 26th, 2018 11:34am
by The Admiral
Thanks!